This is a piece of writing about people started to disappear. I wrote it because we had to write a narrative writing for our writing test.

The day things started disappearing.

“ROOAARR!!!” Once upon a time there was a boy named Ichigo Kurosaki and Ganju Shiba. They can see spirits(or ghosts) that is in the earth realm. Ichigo lived in New York City with his friend Ganju Shiba. Ichigo is 15 years of age and is brave and strong who likes dangerous things like fighting a monster or more terrifying creatures. He also likes to go on adventures. Ganju Shiba is 14 years of age and likes to go on adventures with Ichigo.

One day a portal appeared at the sky and people and animals started disappearing. Ichigo eyes were wide open and saw what had happened. He could not believe what just happened. Ichigo told Ganju to follow him so that they can talk privately. Ichigo whispered to Ganju and said “Ganju it’s the hollows again they came back for more”. “What can we do to stop it” whispered back Ganju. “Why can’t we turn into our soul reaper forms” said Ichigo.

Ichigo and Ganju transformed into their soul reaper forms by having this pill called the soul mod pill. They are pills which has souls in the pill that takes over there body and acts as them. They waited till the hollows came back for more people.

Suddenly a portal appeared again from the sky and there were hollows coming out of it. Ichigo and Ganju was ready for battle. Ichigo and Ganju went back to back and crushed every hollow that they can find in the city, but more portals appeared from the sky. Ichigo had been injured from being bitten by a hollow on his leg. He had his sword ready to swing at the final hollow. Then Suddenly there was crack at the sky and there was the king of hollows. Ichigo told Ganju to finish the last hollow for him so that he can defeat the king of hollows. Ichigo went up to it and got his sword and swung his mighty sword at the king hollow and teared him in half. New York City was safe and sound. Ichigo and Ganju had returned into their normal forms and celebrated with a party with their family and friends.

THE END

BY: Kaufusi Mei Jr

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