How was fermentation used to preserve foods in Maori culture? By Mei ,Richard and Danh

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Commenting Others Work

My S.W.O.T Analysis

This is my S.W.O.T Analysis presentation. I hoped you enjoy it.

Kid President

This is my presentation about Kid President that can change the world. I hope you enjoy it.

Blog commenting

On Wednesday, James came and visited our class to set up and get us posting on our blogs. We also looked at the commenting style and commented on blogs from around the school and cluster. Here is a copy of the presentation we used.

This is a piece of writing about people started to disappear. I wrote it because we had to write a narrative writing for our writing test.

The day things started disappearing.

“ROOAARR!!!” Once upon a time there was a boy named Ichigo Kurosaki and Ganju Shiba. They can see spirits(or ghosts) that is in the earth realm. Ichigo lived in New York City with his friend Ganju Shiba. Ichigo is 15 years of age and is brave and strong who likes dangerous things like fighting a monster or more terrifying creatures. He also likes to go on adventures. Ganju Shiba is 14 years of age and likes to go on adventures with Ichigo.

One day a portal appeared at the sky and people and animals started disappearing. Ichigo eyes were wide open and saw what had happened. He could not believe what just happened. Ichigo told Ganju to follow him so that they can talk privately. Ichigo whispered to Ganju and said “Ganju it’s the hollows again they came back for more”. “What can we do to stop it” whispered back Ganju. “Why can’t we turn into our soul reaper forms” said Ichigo.

Ichigo and Ganju transformed into their soul reaper forms by having this pill called the soul mod pill. They are pills which has souls in the pill that takes over there body and acts as them. They waited till the hollows came back for more people.

Suddenly a portal appeared again from the sky and there were hollows coming out of it. Ichigo and Ganju was ready for battle. Ichigo and Ganju went back to back and crushed every hollow that they can find in the city, but more portals appeared from the sky. Ichigo had been injured from being bitten by a hollow on his leg. He had his sword ready to swing at the final hollow. Then Suddenly there was crack at the sky and there was the king of hollows. Ichigo told Ganju to finish the last hollow for him so that he can defeat the king of hollows. Ichigo went up to it and got his sword and swung his mighty sword at the king hollow and teared him in half. New York City was safe and sound. Ichigo and Ganju had returned into their normal forms and celebrated with a party with their family and friends.

THE END

BY: Kaufusi Mei Jr

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This is a piece of writing about my baby cousin's birthday. I wrote it because we had been looking at recounts in class. This is my final copy after editing and redrafting.

“C’MON!!!!”I was getting ready for my church event, but i wanted to go to my baby cousin’s birthday. While I was getting ready, I zoomed into the living room and suddenly the phone rang. It was my Auntie. She called because she invited us to go to Genghis Khan. My mum was confused because we had to go to church. But then my sister said that we could only celebrate my little baby cousin’s birthday once and that there is no time machine to just go back and forth in life. So right after she said that, we all decided to go Genghis Khan.

As we arrived at Genghis Khan, we got out off the car and saw them waving at us, so we waved backed to them. They said that they were waiting for us so that we could start by singing Happy Birthday. While we were singing the happy birthday song to my baby cousin, she tried to escaped out of my mum’s hands because all she wanted to do is run around the whole place screaming!

After that we ate meat ,fries, and all kinds of yummy and delicious food. I ordered pancakes with chocolate ice cream, chocolate syrup ,and nuts for dessert. I could smell the strong scent of the delicious pancakes. When I finished the whole entire stack of pancakes I ordered, my stomach was stuffed.

The place was about to close and we had to go home. I really wanted to stay behind… because of the pancakes. My favourite part was that we could celebrate and have fun with my little, cute baby cousin.

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